Message Forum: Re: It's bad, but it could be verse.

Re: It's bad, but it could be verse.

Posted By: Don the Monkeyman, on host 24.79.16.83
Date: Monday, November 26, 2001, at 13:59:05
In Reply To: Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. posted by Adam Bomb on Monday, November 26, 2001, at 13:38:35:

> > > Today is, again, a honey.
> > > The weather is seventy and sunny.
> > > To heck with this old computer.
> > > I'm going to go ride my scooter.
> > > Howard
> >
> > Today it is cold and snowy,
> > Below freezing (at least it's not blowy)
> > At my computer, which sits inside,
> > I read Howard's post and almost cried.
> > Don "Not really" Monkey
>
> Don't sacrifice meter for rhyme.
> That should be considered a crime.
> Take heed my kind word,
> Don't say you've just heard,
> Or your poems won't be worth a dime.
>
> Adam "Mr. Constructive Criticism" Bomb

When writing a beautiful po'm,
I usually start with my meter,
When an orc I am trying to beat'r,
I try to write well, but I blow 'em.

Don "Not at my best today" Monkey

Replies To This Message

Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Sosiqui - Mon, 11/26/2001, 14:29:18
- Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Fuzzpilz - Tue, 11/27/2001, 09:17:58
  - Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Mike, the penny-stamp man - Thu, 11/29/2001, 06:59:33
  - Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Sosiqui - Tue, 11/27/2001, 14:47:26
- Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Adam Bomb - Mon, 11/26/2001, 14:39:40

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Message:	> > > > Today is, again, a honey. > > > > The weather is seventy and sunny. > > > > To heck with this old computer. > > > > I'm going to go ride my scooter. > > > > Howard > > > > > > Today it is cold and snowy, > > > Below freezing (at least it's not blowy) > > > At my computer, which sits inside, > > > I read Howard's post and almost cried. > > > Don "Not really" Monkey > > > > Don't sacrifice meter for rhyme. > > That should be considered a crime. > > Take heed my kind word, > > Don't say you've just heard, > > Or your poems won't be worth a dime. > > > > Adam "Mr. Constructive Criticism" Bomb > > When writing a beautiful po'm, > I usually start with my meter, > When an orc I am trying to beat'r, > I try to write well, but I blow 'em. > > Don "Not at my best today" Monkey
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