Re: It's bad, but it could be verse.
Adam Bomb, on host 24.124.51.11
Monday, November 26, 2001, at 14:39:40
Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. posted by Sosiqui on Monday, November 26, 2001, at 14:29:18:
> Trochees and iambs clip-clop on the page, > Giving the poet frustration and rage. > Perfect meter and rhyming, > The words and the timing, > Are tricky for even a sage. > > The dancing of words as they move 'cross the page > Is something delicious, sublime. > "The moon's shining crescent, > Bold white iridescent..." > A perfect example of rhyme. > > With a sing-song meter, as seen up above, > The difference is brilliantly clear, > Compare it to Milton, to Homer or Frost > Or the iambic foot of Shakespeare. > > And I have no idea where to keep going with this > So I'll let it be with this last little twist. > > Sosi"poetry!"qui
Bravo! Bravo! Author! Author!
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