Re: It's bad, but it could be verse.
Sosiqui, on host 130.65.100.113
Monday, November 26, 2001, at 14:29:18
Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. posted by Don the Monkeyman on Monday, November 26, 2001, at 13:59:05:
> Don't sacrifice meter for rhyme. > That should be considered a crime. > Take heed my kind word, > Don't say you've just heard, > Or your poems won't be worth a dime. > > Adam "Mr. Constructive Criticism" Bomb > > When writing a beautiful po'm, > I usually start with my meter, > When an orc I am trying to beat'r, > I try to write well, but I blow 'em. > > Don "Not at my best today" Monkey
Trochees and iambs clip-clop on the page, Giving the poet frustration and rage. Perfect meter and rhyming, The words and the timing, Are tricky for even a sage.
The dancing of words as they move 'cross the page Is something delicious, sublime. "The moon's shining crescent, Bold white iridescent..." A perfect example of rhyme.
With a sing-song meter, as seen up above, The difference is brilliantly clear, Compare it to Milton, to Homer or Frost Or the iambic foot of Shakespeare.
And I have no idea where to keep going with this So I'll let it be with this last little twist.
Sosi"poetry!"qui
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