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Re: It's bad, but it could be verse.

Posted By: Adam Bomb, on host 24.124.51.11
Date: Monday, November 26, 2001, at 13:38:35
In Reply To: Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. posted by Don the Monkeyman on Monday, November 26, 2001, at 12:05:22:

> > Today is, again, a honey.
> > The weather is seventy and sunny.
> > To heck with this old computer.
> > I'm going to go ride my scooter.
> > Howard
>
> Today it is cold and snowy,
> Below freezing (at least it's not blowy)
> At my computer, which sits inside,
> I read Howard's post and almost cried.
> Don "Not really" Monkey

Don't sacrifice meter for rhyme.
That should be considered a crime.
Take heed my kind word,
Don't say you've just heard,
Or your poems won't be worth a dime.

Adam "Mr. Constructive Criticism" Bomb

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Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Don the Monkeyman - Mon, 11/26/2001, 13:59:05
- Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Sosiqui - Mon, 11/26/2001, 14:29:18
  - Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Fuzzpilz - Tue, 11/27/2001, 09:17:58
    - Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Mike, the penny-stamp man - Thu, 11/29/2001, 06:59:33
    - Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Sosiqui - Tue, 11/27/2001, 14:47:26
  - Re: It's bad, but it could be verse. - Adam Bomb - Mon, 11/26/2001, 14:39:40

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