Re: My Latest Poem
Nyperold, on host 216.111.134.52
Thursday, April 6, 2000, at 14:43:42
My Latest Poem posted by unipeg on Thursday, April 6, 2000, at 11:13:55:
> Petal by petal > Pale in the > Pre-dawn light > She unfolds > Perfuming the air > With the slight scent > Of trust. > Her heart > Takes patience to reach > Friendship > Is not taken lightly > At the first sign > Of disinterest > She shuts. > As petals open > The dust of emotions > Long untouched > Powders the ground > And she sneezes, > withdraws > From the presence of pain. > As she reopens > Her wounds > Begin to heal > Under a forgiving eye > And each petal > Opens more easily > Than the last > Until > With the sunrise > The last golden-pink petal > Folds back. > What is found there > Is not what is expected > There is much darkness > To be removed > Sifted through > Burning the outer petals > It happens to touch > But once gone > She shines. > The flower is not perfect > A few parts are dying > and shetrembles > Threatening to close > At the slightest provocation > But after long wait > She is open > And in the purple blush > Of early morning > That is beauty enough. > > > Feel free to comment, critique, accept into the Poetry Pool, whatever =) > > unipeg
This is now one of my favorite Yorgey poems(A little FQ reference, there. :) ), with "White" and "Balloon Days".
Nyper"Wow. Just, wow."old
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